Referring to men, most of them (25%) worked in manufacturing industry in 1990 but the figure had decreased in the following twenty years, standing atonly 10% in 2010. This downward trend was also seen in the rate ofmale employees in retail and shops, declining from 23% to 8%. On the contrary, there were more and more men finding jobs in tourism, and its percentage almost tripledover this period. In terms of health field, 9% of men were hired both in 1990 and 2000 with an increase of1% in 2010.

Regarding to women, 23% of them undertook the work related to tourism at the beginning ofthis period and in next twenty years its percent stabilised at25%. The similar situation occurred in the figure forretail and shops where 13% of women worked in per ten years. However, meanwhile, the percentage of female staffs in health and manufacturing both had dropped.

Overall, it can be seen that compared with men, more women chose to work in tourism and health industry in the 20-year period. (197 words)

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类型：社会类

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Some peopl ethink that governments should do more to make their citizens have a healthy diet. Others, however, believe that individuals should be responsible for their own diet and health.

Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

范文解析

本题属于社会生活类话题，其中探讨了公民健康的问题。题目中的双方观点一方认为政府应该对公民的健康饮食负责；另一方则认为公民要对自己负责。考生在思考论点时有可能会对政府部分存在一些问题，尤其之前如果没有阅读过政府话题范文或者积累过相关论点。毕竟本国国情对于食品安全的重视和监管才刚刚起步，因此，思考论点时可以设定为西方国家的背景之下。

文章结构

paragraph 1:结合时代背景引入话题。

paragraph 2: 论述政府干预的行为。1. 制定食品安全法律 2. 提高不健康食品的消费税。

paragraph 3: 论述个人生活方式和饮食结构对于健康的影响。

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点，强调自己的观点。

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范文

In contemporary society, government is supposed to fulfill the mission of promoting the progress of citizens’ living quality. Therefore, some taxpayers insist that the authority should ensure them have ahealthy diet; while others contend individuals themselves should be accountable fortheir diet and health.Admittedly, both sides are reasonable to some extent and I would analyze them as follows.

On one hand, for the sake ofpublic health, several measures ought to be taken by the state and the most urgent is thatthey should enact laws aiming to assess food nutrition. In recent years, we are appalled bythe frequent outbreak ofsuch incidents like milk powder adulterated with melamine, lean meat powderand a spate offood contaminationcases. In response, policy makers are called forto strengthen the scrutiny of food securityin an attempt to make sure what consumers eat is safe. Apart from this, it is also wise toimpose a heavy tax onunhealthy food. Statistics show that 60% of people who suffer fromobesity, heartdisease or high blood pressureare fond of eatingjunk food containing too much fat and sugar. Undoubtedly, the increasing price of those food canrestraincustomers frompurchasing them. As a result, the masses may tend to choose the balanced and nutritious diet.

Onthe other hand, it is a fact that people’s lifestyle and choice ofdietary structuregenerate direct impacts on their health. Due to the convenience of modern vehicles, most residents prefer to take buses or drive private cars to someplace which may be within less than half of an hour’s walk from their home. Besides, the advanced internet technology enables nettersto do online shopping, order food and even transfer money from e-bank account without stepping out of home. Under such circumstance, lessand less people take regular exercisesuch as walking or bicycling, which is deemed as a main reason for the erosion of a natural resistance to diseases.What’s more,fruits and vegetable should be given priority in our daily diet. Despite the tasty flavor of fried chicken orroast meatand steak, it is suggested to guarantee the intake of vitamins and fiberis adequateto keep fit.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, government’s interferenceas well as personal behaviors are indissolubly bound up withpublic health and only when both parties make concerted effortscan citizens live a healthy life. (405 words)

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